L.Is:
To use the whole writing process to create a piece of writing to a high standard
language to keep my reader interested
to use a plan or organise ideas and generate strong and effective To use new sentence starters
Camp memoir
Camp is the quietest place you could ever be and I felt the same way it really was the pine tree forest that was the best because of the birds choruses especially the tuis humming was in sane but it went on for ages which was a bit annoying cause it got stuck in your ears and it was all you could hear. the fields where humongus You could have run around for years and you would still have land like acres. squeak squeak those were the bikes as they went on and on and on the greasy handlebars and the squeaky chairs were all you needed to hear to know that you had an awesome bike at least that’s what I needed to know now. next comes the pine trees 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 ahhhhh I can’t even count how many pine trees there are here in this area so how am I supposed to count the whole forest? Well luckily we didn't have to which was good because we would be their for years if it would have happened but I guess that you already know how many trees I’m talking about even without seeing them anyway thanks for taking the time to read this!!!
L.Is:
To use the whole writing process to create a piece of writing to a high standard
language to keep my reader interested
to use a plan or organise ideas and generate strong and effective To use new sentence starters
Camp memoir
Camp is the quietest place you could ever be and I felt the same way it really was the pine tree forest that was the best because of the birds choruses especially the tui's humming was in sane but it went on for ages which was a bit annoying cause it got stuck in your ears and it was all you could hear.
The fields where humongus You could have run around for years and you would still have land like acres. squeak squeak those were the bikes as they went on and on and on the greasy handlebars and the squeaky chairs were all you needed to hear to know that you had an awesome bike at least that’s what I needed to know now.
Next comes the pine trees 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 ahhhhh I can’t even count how many pine trees there are here in this area so how am I supposed to count the whole forest? Well luckily we didn't have to which was good because we would be their for years if it would have happened but I guess that you already know how many trees I’m talking about even without seeing them anyway thanks for taking the time to read this!!!
