water slide memoir

on the day of the water slide I was shivering because of that breezy air blowing onto me making me cold.I smelt a nice fresh smell of water.It looked so extremely creepy but at the same time it also looked really really fun.So when it came to my turn i was scared.Then I sat on the slide folded my legs crossed my arms and lay back.After that before I was ready they pulled my my legs and off I went sliding down that creepy slide saying please make this a good ride more than three times!then after that I finally got to the end and made a BIG smash in the water.I jumped out after that and really in joyed it.